
How are you introducing your character? You know - the first time we see him or her? What is she doing? Can you accomplish more in that one scene? What are they arguing about - what are they doing -- what are they IN THE MIDDLE OF.
Remember William Goldman? Start Late. Get out early. Start a scene as late as possible, get out of it as soon as possible.
So, when you introduce your hero -- what character revealing thing are they doing? Layer it up. What character revealing piece of clothing, argument, action, everything - try and cram as much as you can in there. Make every scene, every moment a thick, juicy bit of a dramatic moment. Remember... this isn't real life. It's a movie. Movies, like love stories, go tell stories of the ordinary -- in a nice casing of the extraordinary.
Show, don't tell.
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